Ancient Manipulation (shadorma format)
(Alexandria, Egypt circa 45 A.D.)Maiden slips her coin in the urn. Water pours from the spout -- and her face shines in the flow as hands rinse off dust. Heron smilesbehind temple doorswonderingif he...
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I too am unfamiliar with this form, but you have manipulated it with perfection.............WRITE ON my friend!!!!!!!
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Wendy,An unexpected turn at the end,so very skillfully written. I lovethe technology, the history, and the poetry.Thank you!!sarah
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Hi Wendy-The conflict of wills... ancient and still struggling even in these modern days.Lovely workmaryann
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Dear Paul, Maryanne, Sarah, Ed, and Jim, I wrote this piece using the Spanish form of Shadorma. This conists of six lines per verse, each containing a very sparse syllable count.3/5/3/3/7/5The verses...
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Wendy, I am very aware of many of the wonderful engineering feats done by the ancients( the Egyptions had several geniuses) I love this mood and the form is excellent! (vending machines in the ancient...
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Hi Jared,Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this poem. I really appreciate your insight and thoughtful consideration.please take caremy best,Wendy
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Wonderfully done, Wendy.Ancient manipulation indeed. (smile)take care, kerri
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Hey Wendy. This one is a bit perplexing. Are you the author? That was my only question. I enjoyed it greatly no matter who wrote it. Nicely done.Yours,Dark
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